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Your Auction Title Can Bring You Success or Failure©
by Cheryl L. Coccaro
Well, you have decided to start selling on eBay -
congratulations!
Let me ask you...are you ready for success or failure? What you
put in your Auction Title can make or break the sale.
Let me tell you a story about my beginning selling adventure:
Since my username on eBay is gypsy-woman., I created unusual
titles that included the word "gypsy" in them. I had a motive in
mind to intrigue the viewer to want to read my auction.
What would make my auction stand out from all the others? I
needed a catchy title...a tease to encourage you to view my
auction, or as they say...a hook!
Believe it or not, a bad title will turn your buyers away quicker
than just about anything else. When you're trying to sell your
jewelry, you need the viewers to stick around long enough to want
to see your picture and read about your item. A bad auction title
or written description will turn people off.
Your title is your very first opportunity to make a positive
impression on your buyer. If that impression is a good
one...informative, creative, and an exciting one, you're off to a
very good start. Similarly, if that first impression is boring,
worn-out, or confusing, your buyers probably won't even get
beyond the first line. In one click, they are on to the next
auction.
When writing auction titles, think about your audience. What
would you search for if you were looking for the item you are
putting up for auction? No matter who your audience is, your
auction title should entice the reader to want to view your
auction.
I used to say that the auction title needed to read correctly,
like a short sentence which would flow from the lips easily, and
give the reader some idea of what exactly the auction is about.
Boy was I wrong! Yes, wrong.
Your auction title should contain all the words that one would
use in a search for the item that you are selling. It doesn't
have to make sense when reading it! At the same time, it should
somewhat explain what the actual item is for sale...leaving
nothing to doubt.
eBay gives you a certain set number of character spaces to
complete your auction title. This is why in some auctions you
will see L@@K or WOW! or any other number of useless characters
in the auction title to fill up the space.
I suggest that you use this space to put meaningful words. Let me
give you an example. Let's say you are selling a "Sterling Silver
Fluorite Wire Wrapped Pendant". Putting exactly that is great,
but another person might put "Purple Pendant Handcrafted".
This only tells the viewer that the pendant is Purple and is made
by hand. One might not click on that auction, because it is not
descriptive enough. Now, if you have seen one purple pendant made
by hand and it wasn't made nicely, you would pass this auction
right by.
Adding the words...Stunning, Beautiful, Gorgeous, Huge, Unique
and One of a Kind would certainly be an addition to the title,
which would entice the viewer. In my eBook I give you the POWER
words which have been proven to entice the buyer to want to read
more!
Beyond being clear and informative in your title, there are a few
other enhancements you should use. Remember when you learned
about rhyme in elementary school? Well, rhyme is very good
creative tool for writing descriptions within your auction. A
rhyming sentence is catchy and fun, almost compelling your reader
to want to keep reading. You should also keep the sentences
short. I offer suggestions and tips throughout my eBook telling
you just how to do exactly that.
A good title gives your audience the idea that your article for
sale has been carefully reviewed. If you are creating a fun
auction, the viewer will want to continue reading. Everyone likes
a good time, and something funny or even personal can be
beneficial towards the sale of your creation.
Auctions that are entertaining, or offer all the information that
one would need, give the buyer a feeling that all questions have
been answered and even that the item created has the same thought
process applied to it. That everything was carefully thought out
and all details taken care of. A perfect professional work of
art! If you are selling a necklace and you don't mention how long
it is, most people won't scroll through your auction only to find
that information missing. The next auction is just a click away!
Give your viewer everything that they need to make the
decision...to Buy It Right Now, or place their bid.
Many times, you don't have the opportunity for a second chance.
So let's get the title right, and let the auction fill in the
rest of the blanks. You do want your first impression to lead to
a sale? Of course, you do.
Last modified:
July 04, 2010
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